Super Saiyan Zen X (attempt 1)

First, sorry if it's not that good, it's nearly 2am where I'm at. Since the game Dragonball Xenoverse, I've been kinda upset that the hair doesn't spike up when he transformed into a super saiyan. So I decided to do it myself. Now I know it looks like Goku's super saiyan, but I was using the same art tutorial to the same hair as from the Goku on the Zenkai Dynasty picture. Anyways, I'm gonna keep trying. Oh and that line on his head, his hair line. So that's all I have to say, goodnight.